the poem fails

So the poem fails. It’s a catastrophe. Doesn’t work. There’s a draft 5. No good.

Well, it was supposed to be like a dream that starts off in a mild form that seems to be real but soon transforms into a nightmare. It was supposed to indicate that compulsive eating is sometimes a symptom of trauma. Making oneself unattractive can be a defense mechanism.

So it goes to the newspaper morgue

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